New Outline and December Writing Marathon

November 25th, 2009 · 7:00 am  →  Writing Process

Hi Folks,
The first three chapters are typically part of the query letter package for an agent. Concerned that I was getting off-target with the revisions, I threw together the revisions and got some feedback. When I did, I discovered two things:
1) I have created a big. damn. world.
2) My story lost its focus.
I spent some [...]