Following the Plot All The Way Through to the End

April 27th, 2010 · 8:00 am  →  Revisions

Wanted to drop by and share something interesting with all of you about what I’ve been learning lately. So, in the first version of ARGENTUM, I wanted to explore the world of the Violet War and needed a story to do it. Did my first draft make an excellent novel? NO. Why? Because the story [...]

A Renewed Sense of Focus

April 24th, 2010 · 1:28 pm  →  Revisions

After a lovely yet busy week, I was finally able to sit down this morning with my manuscript for ARGENTUM and focus on the rewrite. I hit today’s goal with no trouble whatsoever; the re-plotting I did to ensure the story had a much narrower focus is working beautifully. I feel that that need to [...]

Wrangling the Details through Novel Writing Tools

April 7th, 2010 · 7:48 am  →  Revisions Writing Process

One of the things that has been difficult to manage through the rewrite process, is the sheer volume of characters and places within the setting. As a result, the story was confusing for me to write, because this is the world that never ends. To help me wrangle this beast, I started looking at tools [...]

Taking a Serious Look at Chapter Breaks

March 22nd, 2010 · 8:41 pm  →  Revisions Writing Process

For those of you who were here for much of the first draft, you know that I had employed a writing technique where I wrote a chapter and then offered a piece of the main character’s memory as the chapter break. The memories in the work are exceptionally important to the plot. Believe me when [...]

It’s March and I’m declaring WAR…on my Manuscript!

March 4th, 2010 · 2:00 am  →  Revisions

Did you know that March was named after Mars, the Roman god of war? Well, this month I’m declaring war…on my manuscript! After going through a few drafts, there are a couple of things I need to revise: 1) The overall story needs to be consistent and a lot more simplified so that it can [...]

Revisions Update and a Look at 2010

January 8th, 2010 · 7:29 pm  →  News & New Releases Revisions Writing Process

Hi folks, In December, I focused on the revisions for ARGENTUM through a December Writing Marathon that I had come up with. December was an extraordinarily busy month for several reasons, including a few additional projects that I did not expect to come up. Even though I didn’t get as much done as I wanted [...]