I feel like I turned a corner this past weekend, because the last two weeks have been…painful. I knew I needed to change the verb tense of my exposition from present to past, but I wasn’t sure how that was going to work for the beginning of the story.
Instead of opening the novel with [...]
Hi everyone,
I am very happy to share with you that I’ve made great progress on Book One of the Violet War this weekend. Not only did I map out the entire book and all remaining chapters and chapter breaks, I was able to get Chapter Eleven reworked and published. (Click here to read Chapter 11.) [...]
At the end of Chapter Three, I stopped posting new chapters for a bit to get some feedback from you, the reader. So far, the most, common remark I’ve gotten through comments and email is that the pacing might be a little off in the beginning, that you have a lot of questions.
I’m now happy [...]